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I feel a mental breakdown
Is coming here, this way
Perhaps if I ignore it
Then it will go away?

Or if I turn my speaker
A bit too loudly up
Then I can disregard it
And maybe it will stop?

Perhaps if I go outdoors
Running far from here
Then I can truly leave it
Abandoning my fear

Or if I take this blanket
And sit down on the floor
Cover my whole body
Then there will be no door

Now if the ceaseless laughing
Simply went away
My thoughts would be pellucid,
Just as clear as day

And if the muffled sobs
Could be eradicated
Then maybe I'd stop being
So overly distracted

But wait, it's quiet now!
The moment has departed,
Hold on, it's almost midnight?
When did you say it started?
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~Dead-Existance Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
Hmm, the tone of this poem reminds me of one of my own...or I'm just crazy.
Anyways, I like it. :D
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~dikarya Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Mood: Love ~FlinchSaint Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
First time I've ever seen the word "pellucid", so I looked it up. I think it's one of my favourite words now.
And I love the line, "Then there will be no door."
Wonderful stuff!
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~dikarya Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and thanks for the fav :)
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~dikarya Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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